Today we presented our offline edit so far to our target audience they thoroughly enjoyed watching it and gave us some improvements these include.
1. Lana will press play so the music starts so we know where the music is coming from
2. Music ends when Lana’s phone rings
3. Close up shot of Lana putting on lipstick so we have a range of camera shots
4. Point of view shop of the bullies running around Naila in a circle to show how irritating it is for her to be bullied in this constant circle
5. Flashback colour change, so it would represent an unhappy time, the colour red which will be used links back to the horror genre
These improvements will be added on to ensure our target audience are satisfied with what they are watching.
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